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o.k so i don't get how to do the uploading the story so copy paste time!!


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Kyoya sat at his desk typing away about the finalization of the graduation. The party they had was just finished and Huni and Mori were sitting at a table eating cake, just like old times, as the twins sat and waited impatiently.

"Haa... What's taking them so long?" Hikaru grumbled passing his fingers through his black hair. Kaoru leaned on the opposite side of the couch and looked at him slightly.

"Give them time Hikaru, you know it's about time that My Lord told Haruhi."

"But how long does it take for him to walk her to the gate? He should of been back by now."

"Ehh? your just jealous because she turned you down last year."

"Humph. No I'm not! I'm just bored sitting here waiting."


Kyoya smirked. He had know as well as Kaoru that Hikaru has been acting over protective of Haruhi after that. He must be compensating for the fact he can't be more then friends by acting like a big brother. Kaoru as well, but more of the type to listen to and ask advice for.

"Don't worry, Tama-Chan will be back soon." Huni smiled cheerfully and he took another bite of his strawberry cake. "Then we can all have cake together."


Kyoya turned to look out the window. to the setting sun. wondering what was taking him. Even if things did go well. It shouldn't have taken this long.

Suddenly the door opened and the king stepped in. Tamaki's head was down so they couldn't see his face. They all looked to him and it was Hikaru that broke the silence.

"So how'd it go?" He turned up his nose and leaned back against the couch. Not going to be surprised at the answer. He had know that Haruhi was going to accep-

"She turned me down." Tamaki smiled lifting up his head his face was flushed and tears were beginning to poke out his eyes. If they all hadn't known better he had looked like he was crying for joy, but they all knew it was just a cover.


"WHAT!" Huni and the twins dropped their jaws in shock. Mori also wore his version of confusion on his face. Kyoya had stopped typing and looked over wide eyed.


About 10 minuets earlier.


Tamaki had convinced Haruhi to take a different route to the gate, seeing as she had refused for him to have his driver let him escort her home, he had lead her to one of the gardens, and had stopped to look at the flowers.

"Sempai, why did you bring me here?" Haruhi looked around. The fountain was beautiful as always and as well as the garden, but she should be getting home to fix dinner. Her father was probably going to act like he was starving when she walked through the door like he always did when she came home later.

Suddenly she felt Tamaki's arms around her. She blushed softly because although it had happen increasingly since she has joined the host club, she was still not use to it.

"I may not be able to see you much anymore." Tamaki said quietly. The joy that had been in his voice vanished. "now that I'm done with high school I'll be going to a university and studying to take over for the family and may not be able to some back." He pulled away slightly and held Haruhi's chin with his thumb and index finger. Looking into her bright brown eyes as they caught the sun just right. "You really are quite cute..."

"Sempi"

He smiled, "Please call me Tamaki." he asked. not in his overzealous tone that reeked of vanity, but in a serious and requesting tone. Then he slowly leaned in. How could he have been so foolish as to think of her as a daughter, he thought as he slowly approached her lips.

"Tamaki." Haruhi interrupted Tamaki a mere inch from her. His eyes widened and he drew away from her just enough to look at her.

"your hurting my neck." she groaned. Her neck was at a uncomfortably odd upward angle and it was beginning to hurt. it was more then likely going to be sore tonight making it hard to sleep and make it ache till morning if he didn't let go.

Tamaki tried to hold in a laugh then let Haruhi go backing away as he held his gut. He laughed so hard that it appeared that tears were forming at his eyes. "Sorry sorry, but as a father i wanted another close look at my daughter before i left." He then straighten up and grabbed her hand and began to drag her towards the front gate, still smiling a fake smile that made Haruhi wonder about it's reasons.

"But ,Tamaki, this won't be the last time we see each other." Haruhi had caught up and was now walking side by side with him and had let go of his hand now because of it. He turned to her as they continued to walk. "you may be busy with school, and business, but we'll be able to meet once in a while. I'm sure of it." Haruhi smiled. "It may not be for a long time, but we'll see each other again."

Again Tamaki laughed "Soo soo, i guess your right." His energy returned and then began to go on about how he'd schedule enough time to come by once a day to check up on her. He had a right to as her father with Haruhi telling him that he didn't have to bother about it that much.

Finally they arrived at the gate and Haruhi bowed good bye and left for home. Not giving the smiling Tamaki a second glance. Once Haruhi was out of sight Tamaki began to head back to the third floor music room. His pace slow and head down he was no longer holding his fake smile and his eyes were flooded with disrepair.

Haruhi may not of realized what he was trying to do, that is why he found it so adorably funny, but her unable to realize it just proved even more that she did not feel the same.


As expected her father nearly tackled her to the ground as she came through the door, complaining that he was hungry. Once she had finished, telling off her father off about how he can cook if he was that hungry only to get replies of wanting her wonderful food more, they sat down to eat. Her father ate with gusto, asking for seconds then thirds, as she slowly ate. Her mind slightly elsewhere.

What was Tamaki talking about. he seemed so serious. It wasn't like they would never see each other again, and what was with him grabbing her like that?

These thoughts, and many like them continued to trail through her mind as she rubbed the back of her neck.



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O.k so i ended it badly, and yes it does look like she turned him down. but has she? well i'll let you know when i decide to write the rest of the fic, but untill then you can come up with your own happy ending for these two. also if your wondering about hikarus hair it's from later in the manga so sorry about the unwanted spoiler for those that got upset. i won't give why he did it though. for that your going to have to read for yourself @
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this has scans of all the current manga and then some. as well as other series, but i'm still waiting for them to update host club.

disclaimer i do not own host club


EDIT 2:
Okie dokie so a lot of you like this little bit of writing
(Bonus to those that actually read this instead of going "omg host club!" *fav -_-; ), and thank you for reading. I finally got around to editing this a bit. Thank you ~emopancakewithadream for reminding me that i needed to do that. Also will eventually make the pic that I've had stuck in my head that created this to replace the screen-cap here, but it's a dream. so one day may not be for a while. *sigh*

apologies again for the bad spelling and grammar, but i didn't even proof read this when it was a first draft and i was too lazy too look it over.

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:iconselexiaoftheheart:
It's sooooo cute!!!! Poor Tama-chan!!! XD I can't wait for more! XD

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"Ahead lies something you need,
But to claim it...
You must lose something dear."
-KH
:icontachiri2617:
thanks so much!
I've been trying to think of other capters to do, but some are getting a little jumbled as to where i'm going lol.
:iconselexiaoftheheart:
Oh boy, I totally know what you mean! XD Well, good luck, and I hope to see more at some point! XD

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"Ahead lies something you need,
But to claim it...
You must lose something dear."
-KH
:icontatteredmemory:
Poor Tama DX I demand that you do something to heal his heart right now and--

Forget all that XD this story was wonderful. It was lovely and so very in-character. I love the way you write Haruhi <3

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TamakixHaruhi is my favorite thing evar 8U

"Ask them if it would be quicker if we cut the baby's head off of the penis so we could put it on the bunny" -Ross Gellar
:icontachiri2617:
Thank-you very much! I tried very hard to make sure that they were in character. it's always the hardest parts about writing fics. I had plans to do more, but i haven't been able to come up with much. i kinda just saw this particular scene in my head and had to write it out. XD
BTW much love!n you actually read the fic! i'm not sure that all the faves on here are actually readers rather then 'OMG OHSHC! pretty pic! MUST FAV!'....
Yeah i hate that...lol
:iconitachirox:
omg beatiful story
i cried at the end tho poor Tamaki TT__TT

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"No matter how we close our eyes, there's a whole world out there bigger than ourselves and our dreams"-Edward Elric
"I LOOVE DOOGS!" -Roy Mustang xD
:icontatteredmemory:
Making things IC can be hard ^^;
Much love!? *rolls in the love* Much love right back to you for writing something so realistic!

Good luck with inspiration for more! <3 personally I can never manage to stretch my Ouran fics beyond oneshots *fails*

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♂ + ♂ =♥
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TamakixHaruhi is my favorite thing evar 8U

"Ask them if it would be quicker if we cut the baby's head off of the penis so we could put it on the bunny" -Ross Gellar

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